When I read the description, the idea of America!Doctor felt wrong, but your writing has made me like the concept very much. Your Doctor 'voice' was flawless. (A good mixture of Four, Ten, and Eleven in his speech.)The scene where America!Doctor asked about his looks was hysterical since it made Arthur oh so uncomfortable in a flustered cute way. Arthur's close but dysfunction family set up was endearing- how they were willing to fight off an alien to protect each other. It was good that Arthur was brave and went back for the Doctor, because A. The Doctor only takes the best and B. Arthur is too loyal not to. This was a very clever adventure you wrote out, and honestly the best crossover I have ever encountered in my reading days.
XOXOX Rhoswen
P.S. -I always knew Arthur's scone was good for something.
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Date: 2011-06-14 05:59 pm (UTC)When I read the description, the idea of America!Doctor felt wrong, but your writing has made me like the concept very much. Your Doctor 'voice' was flawless. (A good mixture of Four, Ten, and Eleven in his speech.)The scene where America!Doctor asked about his looks was hysterical since it made Arthur oh so uncomfortable in a flustered cute way. Arthur's close but dysfunction family set up was endearing- how they were willing to fight off an alien to protect each other. It was good that Arthur was brave and went back for the Doctor, because A. The Doctor only takes the best and B. Arthur is too loyal not to. This was a very clever adventure you wrote out, and honestly the best crossover I have ever encountered in my reading days.
XOXOX
Rhoswen
P.S. -I always knew Arthur's scone was good for something.