Oh hey Card!verse. It's been a while since I've read one of those. Possibly a few days give or take, since USxUK week has caused a flood of posts and at least one person had picked this verse to write for. Not that I'm complaining. XD
Actually, you kept everyone pretty well in character, even Roderich and he's hard to write for. I wondered what Alfred's master plan was. That had a really sweet ending to it. I also liked the inclusion of Italy and Germany's grandfathers in this. They were amusing as hell. ;)
It's nice to read stories from different parts of Card!verse, this one being the "after they got together and were married" part of the universe. And they're both perfectly capable at what they're doing. (Alfred sometimes has to work up to it other fics.) This was a nice little fluff story with a "day in the life of" scenario. Nice job. I really enjoyed this fic. Good luck with USxUS Sweethhearts Week. And thanks for the fanservice. ;)
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Date: 2012-02-12 10:52 pm (UTC)Actually, you kept everyone pretty well in character, even Roderich and he's hard to write for. I wondered what Alfred's master plan was. That had a really sweet ending to it. I also liked the inclusion of Italy and Germany's grandfathers in this. They were amusing as hell. ;)
It's nice to read stories from different parts of Card!verse, this one being the "after they got together and were married" part of the universe. And they're both perfectly capable at what they're doing. (Alfred sometimes has to work up to it other fics.) This was a nice little fluff story with a "day in the life of" scenario. Nice job. I really enjoyed this fic. Good luck with USxUS Sweethhearts Week. And thanks for the fanservice. ;)